Raziel and Remiel

Firstly I would like to say, I like the colors. They are very vivid and draw attention. Your technique is quite good and both of them look nice. I like the one with facial hair. He is quite handsome ^^
Their hairs look awesome. Beautiful shading. Yet I think, their skin looks a bit artificial, like skin of Sims. It is just too smooth, they look like people from cosmetics advertisements. Their eyes are impressive but I have a feeling like the ones of the guy with facial hair were a bit too big.
The texture of the shirts is nice. It looks very realistic. In my opinion, their jackets are blurred a bit. Anyway, it does not disturb much.
The anatomy and shading is just perfect.
The background is simple, but nice. Well, there are persons who should draw attention, not background. That is good.
It is a shame, the picture is so static. It does not express any idea but drawing these persons. The picture show me what they look like but nothing more. Well, I know you just wanted it to be like this but I will need to give you less points for originality because of it (Although the characters look quite original due to design).
Well, frankly speaking, I would like to draw like this. I like this picture, the technique is amazing. So I add it to favourites <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/>
By the way, sorry for my English <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a…" width="19" height="19" alt="" title="Sweating a little..."/>